This week in writing we did a Character description about Jeffery in Hitting the traget story
Thursday, July 8, 2021
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Hello Anna-Lee,
ReplyDeleteThis must be a very busy farm, lucky Jeffery has 98 kids to take care of all those animals! A very imaginative character description, but I wonder if next time you could put some more visual images to help readers imagine Jeffery?
-Miss Mathieson