These past few day have been alright i have been walking my dogs and making my family lunch and i took my dogs to the river and saw a black swan and my puppy has trying to chase it around but it didn't work and he found a stick and both dogs were in the water playing around and then we walked around then we walked back to the car then went home and i talked to my friends and played with my dogs and did some school work and then i had dinner and mum made lamb shanks with mash potato and veggies i was so good and i played with my dogs then i went to bed and woke up and got ready for our class google meet and it was pet day.Well thats all i have to say today hope you guys are keeping safe while we are in lockdown and hope to see you guys soon-Anna-lee
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Thursday, August 26, 2021
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Kia ora Anna Lee,
ReplyDeleteSounds like you are having a lovely time at home with your whanau. Your dogs will love having you all at home!
It would be great to see some photos of your adventures during lockdown!
Next time, think about how you could display your work using a DLO to make your blog visually appealing for your reader.
Keep up the great work, Anna-Lee! I can't wait to hear all about your next adventure.
Miss Rogers :)
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Hi Anna-Lee,
ReplyDeleteIt is great to know you have enjoyed your time with your family and your dogs. What breed are your dogs? Did you get to show your dogs to Miss Rogers and your classmates on our Pet day last time?
Next time, it would be great if you could include some photos to make your post more captivating, and remember to punctuate your writing as well.
Stay safe,
Miss Helen